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Fantasy World Creations => General Discussion => Under the Bard's Tree => Topic started by: Emperor Wilbers on April 02, 2012, 07:12:40 PM

Title: A lonely Peddler
Post by: Emperor Wilbers on April 02, 2012, 07:12:40 PM
I had a few spare minutes so I came up w/ this! Enjoy!


A lonely Peddler travels with his accompanying ox,

His wares chiming as they dangled, and shook, and clanged.

He comes upon an unfamiliar town,

With greetings, and welcomes, he was thankful,

For the day had been successful, with many sales he had made.

But alas, he must go, and with hardy goodbyes, he did.

A lonely Peddler travels with his accompanying ox.
Title: Re: A lonely Peddler
Post by: Throndir on April 02, 2012, 07:36:08 PM
I liked it. xD It's more reminiscent of the past stuff, which is a plus. XD Have you written other things in the past?
Title: Re: A lonely Peddler
Post by: Kazamatta on April 12, 2012, 06:34:22 PM
Good write. Keep it up Emperor.